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... ls that it is not in place, the lines are not strong enough, there is no momentum, and there is no feeling of blood boiling during the battle.

So today I revised chapters 265 to 287.

Make the lines stronger, more imposing, and the battle scenes more passionate.

If you are interested, you can read it again without resubscribing.

Some are modified more, some are modified less.

Basically, the original chapter is 2,000 words, and the revised one is at least 2,200 w ...

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